The way you presented your 25 word pitch is good. I like how you've used imaginative and unique words to sell your magazine. I would be willing to pay £3.00 for this magazine, as it is different and eye-catching. I think that you should improve on why you would want your target audience to be both genders.
Adam! It seems that you have a very clear indication about how your magazine will be presented. I like how your magazine will be produced for both male and female readers as you will not be restricted on the types of articles that you could create. I would be willing to pay £3.00 for your magazine. Finally to improve I would be careful to you don't use to many features may put off the reader from getting your magazine! :-)
I think the idea for your magazine is very clear and effective. I think the fact that you have made your magazine accessible is great and allows for a wide variety of people to view and comment on your magazine. This allows for you to improve and mold your magazine to cater for your audience perfectly. I would pay £3.00 for you magazine as I feel that the content is good and fits this price tag the most. All I can suggest as an improvement is that you make sure you get the right balance between creativity and organisation to keep the style of your magazine.
You understand exactly what you want your magazine to be about and what is represents to the public. You also have a clear indication of who your target market are, i can tell this due to the fact you have told us nearly all the information we would want to know about your magazine. However as the consumer I would want to know what makes your magazine unique from others such as NME and Q, without a unique selling point people would most likely rather buy a magazine that is famous so that they know exactly what they're going to get and they know it would appeal to them.
Hello Adam. It is clear what market you want to enter with your magazine genre and age range you are aiming at. I feel this is good as you have made it available to males and females which allows a wider variety of people to be interested in you magazine. I would consider paying around £3.00 for your magazine as I feel it is appealing and seems very professional. However to improve I would suggest making more effort to appeal to both male and female audiences.
Good Afternoon Adam , you have clearly shown who your magazine is aimed at , and it is good that you have aimed it at male and female audiences which gives it huge variety . i would pay £3.50 for your magazine as it is very appealing and you have clearly thought it out and are aiming to make it very professional . However to improve i feel it would be better to make it more relevant to the female audience as well as male to get the balance right .
I like how you've mentioned in detail what is going to appear in your magazine, who it will appeal to and what it will look like. By using both genders allows you to gain more readers and this makes it appeal to a wider audience. I would pay £2.50 for your magazine. To improve, use words which can relate to both genders. This will draw in more readers as both genders can relate to them.
I like how you've used a mixture of words and images to present your pitch, i would pay around £3 for your magazine. To improve you could show evidence of a magazine that is targeted at both male and females.
The way you presented your 25 word pitch is good. I like how you've used imaginative and unique words to sell your magazine. I would be willing to pay £3.00 for this magazine, as it is different and eye-catching. I think that you should improve on why you would want your target audience to be both genders.
ReplyDeleteAdam! It seems that you have a very clear indication about how your magazine will be presented. I like how your magazine will be produced for both male and female readers as you will not be restricted on the types of articles that you could create.
ReplyDeleteI would be willing to pay £3.00 for your magazine.
Finally to improve I would be careful to you don't use to many features may put off the reader from getting your magazine! :-)
I think the idea for your magazine is very clear and effective. I think the fact that you have made your magazine accessible is great and allows for a wide variety of people to view and comment on your magazine. This allows for you to improve and mold your magazine to cater for your audience perfectly. I would pay £3.00 for you magazine as I feel that the content is good and fits this price tag the most. All I can suggest as an improvement is that you make sure you get the right balance between creativity and organisation to keep the style of your magazine.
ReplyDeleteYou understand exactly what you want your magazine to be about and what is represents to the public. You also have a clear indication of who your target market are, i can tell this due to the fact you have told us nearly all the information we would want to know about your magazine. However as the consumer I would want to know what makes your magazine unique from others such as NME and Q, without a unique selling point people would most likely rather buy a magazine that is famous so that they know exactly what they're going to get and they know it would appeal to them.
ReplyDeleteHello Adam. It is clear what market you want to enter with your magazine genre and age range you are aiming at. I feel this is good as you have made it available to males and females which allows a wider variety of people to be interested in you magazine. I would consider paying around £3.00 for your magazine as I feel it is appealing and seems very professional. However to improve I would suggest making more effort to appeal to both male and female audiences.
ReplyDeleteGood Afternoon Adam , you have clearly shown who your magazine is aimed at , and it is good that you have aimed it at male and female audiences which gives it huge variety . i would pay £3.50 for your magazine as it is very appealing and you have clearly thought it out and are aiming to make it very professional . However to improve i feel it would be better to make it more relevant to the female audience as well as male to get the balance right .
ReplyDeleteI like how you've mentioned in detail what is going to appear in your magazine, who it will appeal to and what it will look like. By using both genders allows you to gain more readers and this makes it appeal to a wider audience.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £2.50 for your magazine.
To improve, use words which can relate to both genders. This will draw in more readers as both genders can relate to them.
I like how you've used a mixture of words and images to present your pitch, i would pay around £3 for your magazine. To improve you could show evidence of a magazine that is targeted at both male and females.
ReplyDelete